Monday, November 1, 2010

“’Halloween Memory in Third-Person."

My most memorable halloween memory was when I ran my bike into a mailbox and cracked my head open.
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2 comments:

  1. Ms. PriesterNovember 2, 2010 at 12:55 AM

    Details, please. :)

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  2. UnknownNovember 2, 2010 at 8:33 AM

    Eric, did you read the directions? You were supposed to write a memory in third-person limited narration. This paragraph is written in first-person narration.
    :(
    This is also incomplete. The assignment was to write a paragraph--not a sentence.

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