“First Persuasive Paragraph.”

Students should be able to play sports if they have low grades. Grades should not have anything to to with a students ability to participate in extracuricular activities such as sports. The reason for that being is that their are alot of benefits associated with students who play sports. Some students are just not mentally able to  meet the academic requirements to be able to play sports. If a student participates in sports it can help teach them alot of valuable life lessons such as perseverance and the knowledge of how to live a  healthy life. The bottom line is that grades can get in the way of a great opportunity for a student to be a part of something greater than themselves.

"Catch the Moon Theme Graphic Organizer"

“Catch the Moon” Grief Paragraph

I believe that the change Luis had expressed as a resullt of his grief he feels as a result of his mothers death is unbelivible. Thats because Luis is a juevinile delinquent who will most likely change his attitude periodically. Also the only reason that Luis did that for Naomi is because he was infatuated with her.

"Homeroom Reform Essay."

Homeroom Reform Essay First Draft=
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Body Paragraph 1
Topic sentence (idea) We believe that if SPA had a new set of computers in the cafe, more students would be able to finish their assignments on time.
Supporting details
how it will work: It will work because if we had up to date computers that are running properly and quicker students would be able to learn and
d complete daily work
why it needs funding:It needs funding because it will make grades go up and the computers we have right now lack several of those needs.


Body Paragraph 2
Topic sentence (personal impact): If we had new computers that students could work on, then they wouldn’t have an excuse to say they lost the homework.
Closing sentence: If we had these needs met the students grades on this campus should improve drastically
Supporting details
way prize will help you The prize will help me because I will be able to work on my schoolwork and complete assignments.
another way prize will help you Another way it would help me is it would improve my technology skills.
Closing sentence That is why getting new computers would benefit me personally.


Body Paragraph 3
Topic sentence (contributions made) The contributions made towards the purchase of new computers would also benefit students in realizing the cost of a computer.
Supporting details
way you have alread that y worked on the project (or something you do related to the project) The way we have already worked on this project is by informing teachers we need b tter technology in order to maintain or improve our grades.
another way you have already worked on the project: Another way we have helped this project is having a specific time we use the computer in order for other kids to get their work done.
Closing sentence In realizing the cost of a computer students will take their work on the computer more seriously.

Body Paragraph 4
Topic sentence (impact on school) If we had new computers for our school it would help the teachers take into consideration giving more assignments online instead of on paper.
Supporting details
way the project will help the students of SPA: The way the
another way the project will help the students of SPA
Closing sentence:


Conclusion Paragraph
Restatement of thesis using new words
Summary of main ideas of body paragraphs:
Final thought


I wrote this essay with Heather W. We wrote it for the KNSD Homeroom Reform Essay Contest.

"SPA Movie & Games Day Paragraph.

When I arrived to school on Friday I was greeted to an unexpected suprise. I found out that I would be spending the whole day at school watching a movie and playing games. We watched a movie called the freedom writers. All in all it was a pretty great day I can't wait for it to happed again.

“SPA Theme Song.”

The song Highway to Hell by AC/DC represents San Pasqual Academy because of that bad choices that some of the people make.The choices that they make will ultimately screw up the rest of their lives

Living easy, living free
Season ticket on a one-way ride
Asking nothing, leave me be
Taking everything in my stride
Dont need reason, dont need rhyme
Aint nothing I'd rather do
Going down, party time
My friends are gonna be there too, yeah

Im on the highway to hell
on the highway to hell
highway to hell
im on the highway to hell

No stop signs, speed limit
Nobodys gonna slow me down
Like a wheel, gonna spin it
Nobodys gonna mess me round
Hey satan, payed my dues
Playing in a rocking band
Hey momma, look at me
Im on my way to the promised land
OWWW

Im on the highway to hell

“’The Bass, the River, and Shelia Mant’ Airhead Stereotype.”

The character known as Sheila Mant in ’The Bass, the River, and Shelia Mant’ can be characterized as a beautiful airhead. The reason for that stereotype is that she is unaware of what is really going on in different situations. An example for that is when the boy she was with let the biggest bass he had ever seen get away for Sheila and she ended up leaving the party in Eric Caswells Corvette. Another instance is when Sheila says to the main character that he is a funny kid after all that he did for her.

Internal and External Conflicts in the Bass the River and Sheila Mant

The internal conflict that occured in the story the Bass the River and Sheila Mant was whether to decide to catch the bass on his rell or whether to take Sheila to the concert. The external conflict was his relationship w his with Sheila and how his date with Sheila would turn out.

"Catch the Moon" Falling in Love.

Does falling in love really change a person? The answer to that question is that it doesn't. Falling in love just makes an individual devoted to a certain person.

“’Halloween Memory in Third-Person."

My most memorable halloween memory was when I ran my bike into a mailbox and cracked my head open.