Tuesday, November 16, 2010

“Catch the Moon” Grief Paragraph

I believe that the change Luis had expressed as a resullt of his grief he feels as a result of his mothers death is unbelivible. Thats because Luis is a juevinile delinquent who will most likely change his attitude periodically. Also the only reason that Luis did that for Naomi is because he was infatuated with her.

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  1. This paragraph is very brief. I wish it included more details from the story.

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